Showing posts with label book reviews. Show all posts
Showing posts with label book reviews. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Review: In Leah's Wake



Life got in the way and I almost didn't have the opportunity to read this book, much less finish it and write a review. But I set aside two days to focus on it, and I'm glad I did. It was worth those two days. It was worth much more than that. In Leah's Wake is beautifully written, haunting, fascinating, and a book that has a lot to say, a lot to teach you, without getting preachy. Since we're all about editing around here, I wanted to talk about a few things that really stood out for me.

Terry Guilano Long did two things exceptionally well with this novel. First, deep POV. Sometimes deep POV is a hard concept to keep in mind when writing, but she pulled it off perfectly. She switched between several POVs within the family, and even one cop who is in the position to view the family. Whenever she switches, it's with purpose. The reader learns something new about the characters, or the world. We may learn new information about a past event or understand how one event greatly impacted the lives of the family in startlingly different ways, for example. We learn there is a thread of memories, of intimacy and love, good times and bad, binding this family together, and sometimes the greatest tragedy is that they don't see that. But we can.

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Opening the Door: Stephen King On Writing and Feedback

Wednesday is book review day at Triumphal Writing, and I was slated to review Stephen King's seminal On Writing, but I can't.  First off I haven't finished it yet, and secondly I can't review it once and then put it away.  There's too much in it to talk about, and I couldn't really "review" it anyway.  Am I to assign a mark and a stamp of approval for such a book, Haley's writing Bible?

No, I won't review it, but I will draw on some wisdom from it as we continue to address the issue of feedback and constructive criticism this week.  Yesterday Haley listed five suggestions on giving and receiving feedback, something writers are (or should be) always engaged in.  Do you want to hear what Stephen King says on the matter?  Well, ok, I'll tell you.   Then, afterwards, you should go to the library or bookstore or amazon or however you acquire books, and read the whole thing for yourself.  Or come back here where we'll surely talk about it again. 

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Book Review: The Virginia Woolf Writers' Workshop



The blurb on the back of The Virginia Woolf Writers' Workshop: Seven Lessons to Inspire Great Writing reads, "Imagine what it might be like if Virginia Woolf were teaching a writers' workshop. What would she say? What elements of her own experience would writers today find valuable?"

I couldn't help but feel a little turned off by the concept of this book, especially when I thumbed through it and saw that it is exactly how the author imagined the answer to those questions: Virginia Woolf is teaching a writing workshop. The scholar in me cringed slightly. I'm a little bit obsessed with Woolf these days. I live next to and go to school in the building she lived in on Gordon Square in London, I like to take walks where she took walks, and any spare moment I find is usually devoted to her novels, her essays, her letters. I honestly was hoping this book would be a well researched, well documented scholarly collection of things Woolf said about writing, much like Virginia Woolf On Women and Writing: Her Essays, Assessments, and Arguments, a book I am currently reading. But no, Danell Jones imagines Virginia herself, in front of a classroom, answering questions and giving writing tips.


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As these things go, I was too quick to judge the book by its cover and blurb. In a sense the book is certainly not scholarly, but my worries over its content and research quality were unwarranted. Jones is not making light of Woolf and her accomplishments or her genius, but instead offering a helpful way to engage with Woolf and her writings on writing. As Jones states in the introduction, the purpose of the book is to present in "a playful way" some of Woolf's "ideas about writing, and at the same time, convey something of her life and her personality." Jones is also careful to use direct quotations from Virginia Woolf's diaries, letters and essay, while maintaining a narrative flow in the imagined conversation. She also provides clear bibliographical information in the notes section, where each quote is reprinted alongside its original source.

Jones also makes apt use of the reminiscences left by Virginia Woolf's family and friends in order to develop her as a living character. She also recognizes her limitations of placing Woolf in the position of leading a writers' workshop. Ok fine, the scholar in me is satisfied. But is what Jones presents helpful to an aspiring writer?


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I'm going to have to say yes. Jones pulls out the best from Virginia Woolf's life and writings. She breaks the short book into seven lessons, seven elements of writing that Woolf indeed found important, and what is in fact relevant to all writers: practicing, working, creating, walking, reading, publishing and doubting.

In "Practicing" we learn we must make time for our writing and write every day. Woolf was jealous of her writing time and organized her day so that her mornings were left uninterrupted. We must stick religiously to a writing schedule, even if it means making difficult sacrifices. We must keep a diary, a private place for our private thoughts and experiments, a place to complain and to have a laugh.


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The chapter, "Working" doesn't provide as many clear tips, but does describe the various forms of work Woolf did in her lifetime, and the importance of having your own quiet space to work. In "Creating" our imaginary Virginia Woolf encourages us to break from conventions and constraints, to recognize that there is not one formula for writing good fiction. However, she reminds us, it is important to be aware of those conventions and to be well read in order to learn from other writers, to "improve your craft by learning from great writers, both living and dead."

The chapter "Walking" emphasizes the need for both regular exercise and interaction and observation of the world, while "Reading" pushes the truth that a good writer must also be a good reader. "Publishing" gives profound advise about what to do and how to look at your work after it is finished, after you have sent it to others. "Publish nothing before you are thirty" Woolf has said, because "you will write for others when you ought only to write for yourself." The final lesson "Doubting" explains that we must be committed as writers, whether or not we are certain of our words or where they will take us, but that we must also always be working to improve our words and style.


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At the end of each lesson is a list of five or six suggestions for warm ups, writing exercises and tips, and at the end of the book Jones provides suggested further reading as well as fiction, nonfiction and poetry writing "sparks", writing exercises based on Woolf's own words about writing.

Overall The Virginia Woolf Writer's Workshop is worth looking at, especially if you admire Woolf and you're looking for some extra help and motivation to start writing your own masterpieces. I would hope, however, that instead of being the end of your experience with Virginia Woolf, that it will be a spring board into Woolf's essays, such as "A Room of One's Own," "Street Haunting," and "Three Guineas." I would even go so far as to suggest the book I mentioned above, Virginia Woolf On Women and Writing, which is full of excerpts from essays, letters and personal writings. As useful as it is to have this fictionalized account of Woolf teaching a writers' workshop, it is no replacement for the power, beauty and wit of Virginia's own words.

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Books I Didn't Know I Owned: The Beginner's Guide To Insight Meditation



Title: The Beginner's Guide to Insight Meditation Authors: Arinna Weisman and Jean Smith Library Journal Review: Weisman, founder of the Dhamma Dena Meditation Center, and Smith, the author on Buddhist subjects, offer a skillfully written book as a companion to Smith's Beginner's Guide to Zen Buddhism (LJ 3/1/00). This book addresses the practices of the Vipassana (Insight Meditation) tradition of Buddhism, and it not only treats sitting and walking meditation within that tradition rather fully but also reviews the basic tenets of Buddhism and provides guidance about selecting teachers and retreat centers. Rating: 4/4 stars Available: Print and Kindle

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I first read this book ten years ago when I was a freshman in college. I took a class on Consciousness and Meditation because I thought I liked philosophy, the professor was a nice guy, and there was a really beautiful boy in the class named Chris who had brown eyes and a great smile. Since I was 19 at the time, and I didn't know much at all about pain and suffering, the book didn't really stick with me. Also, it turned out that I hated philosophy, and I especially didn't like the teacher, who I got into long arguments with, but that's a story for another time. I honestly thought this books was gone forever, and when I found it on my bookshelf the other day, I immediately thought "I should read this." A book about insight meditation doesn't have much to do with writing at first glance, but I felt like it was a very informative and in some ways enlightening read. I already blogged about how I think it'll help me and others with writing, but I found it a very helpful book in general. First, it's very engaging. The authors know what they're talking about, and their profound happiness, their balance, their peace of mind and lovingkindness resonates through each word and on every page. I wanted to trust them and follow their guidance because each chapter was offered as a gift, not a command. The authors provide a good deal of information about the practice, the teachings of Buddha, the history of Buddhism, as well as their own advice about readings, retreats, and finding teachers. But the book never seems like it has too much information. I wasn't overwhelmed by the introduction into a new belief system with its own history and culture. Straightforward but concise, each chapter is easy to consume and digest. Having said all of that, I feel like I should read the book two or three more times. And this is just a beginner's guide, so there's obviously a great deal of information they didn't cover. If you're interested in learning more about Buddhism or meditation, I highly recommend it.

Join me next time when I'll review another book I didn't know I owned, Fist Stick Knife Gun: A Personal History of Violence

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

The Seven Factors of Great Writing



I'm reading The Beginner's Guide to Insight Meditation by Arinna Weisman and Jean Smith to review tomorrow, and I realized that it actually makes for a really interesting writer's guide. At times I had to remind myself that they were discussing the personal road to Nirvana not the best way to write your next novel. But it just so happens that the Seven Factors of Enlightenment also seem to be the Seven Factors of Great Writing. They are mindfulness, investigation, effort, rapture, tranquility, concentration, and equanimity. Mindfulness might be where the breaking point happens between competent writers and great writers. "The Buddha described two kinds of mindfulness: bare attention, that quality of knowing directly and intimately the essentials of experience without interpretation; and general comprehension which understands the purpose of what we are doing" (120). Writers need to cultivate both kinds of mindfulness, simultaneously reducing the world around them to the essentials, breaking down the elements to discover how the pieces work, or don't work, together. At the same time, they need to be students of the human condition so they can understand why people behave the way they do, what motivates certain emotions and actions, what makes the world what it is, or what could change the world in an instant. Constantly asking questions is a sign of mindfulness, and that leads to investigation

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"Investigation can counter boredom and aversion by lighting up the mind with questions such as 'What is my experience?' 'What are the details of it?' 'Do I really know it?'" (131). These are good questions for anybody to ask, but a writer takes these questions as a starting point to more investigation, more inquiries. If you're stuck on what to write, you can jolt your muse by asking a series of questions about yourself and the world around you. "What is my experience and how does that differ from my brother's experience?" From there, the only thing stopping you is your imagination. Writing is an attempt to answer questions and solve mysteries. Some of them are explicitly drawn questions and mysteries, like the work you might do for a research essay, and some of the mysteries are more subtle, implicit, maybe we don't even know they're inside of us. If you're stuck on a school assignment or you have writer's block, find something to investigate. Investigation leads to effort. "The Buddha described four ways we can make courageous effort: guarding, abandoning, nurturing and maintaining"( 114). When I read that line, I immediately thought of my greatest challenge as a writer. It's not the search for ideas, since there are ideas and characters and new worlds everywhere you look. My greatest challenge isn't motivation, since there's nothing I love more than losing myself in my imagination and bringing a new story to life. My greatest challenge is the internal editor, the little voice that criticizes everything I do until I'm paralyzed with indecision and uncertainty. I know I'm not the only one who feels this way. Every writer at one point or another is secretly convinced they suck. Every. Single. One. That self-doubt may last for a few minutes, a few hours, or a few years. When the self-doubt is allowed to go on for that long, it usually looks a lot like writer's block.

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It's possible to protect yourself from the destructive imps that would hinder all progress. If you're aware of a possible threat, you can guard yourself against it. This may take some self-evaluation. Are there any particular factors or events that set your inner editor off? Are there particular people that harm your self-confidence? Is there past trauma informing your current actions? You have to protect yourself against the circumstances that cause your insecurities and fear. At the same time, when the critical voices and feelings start, make the effort to abandon it. Don't feed into the critical thoughts, creating a constant loop of doubt and debasement. Recognize they're present, acknowledge them, and then dismiss them because you are in charge of them. Not the other way around. Nurturing involves creating the mental space that will lead to positive feelings and results. Don't just focus on the things that hurt you. Seek out and cultivate positive influences. I love the definition of rapture. "Rapture is the joyous interest that pervades the mind and body with lightness and happiness." Naturally, they're referring to quite a different state than what I'm thinking about, but isn't that exactly what it's like when a project really clicks? Don't you feel a sense of lightness and happiness when a plot goes into high gear, when characters began to speak for themselves, or when you finally have the perfect thesis statement for your research paper? Isn't it that sense of lightness and happiness that carries you through to the end of a difficult project and then beyond? Ultimately, isn't that what writers strive for and what students always secretly want to capture? The moment when you're imbued with that joyous interest and you reach a higher level beyond self-doubt? You don't have to be an author or self-identify as a writer to reach this state of rapture. Everybody is capable of it, including the student who is only writing the essay because he "has to."

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"Investigation, effort and rapture are called the arousing factors; tranquility, concentration and equanimity are called the stabilizing or calming factors" (130). Writing requires energy, enthusiasm, confidence, and joyous interest. But it also requires the stabilizing factors. Tranquility brings peace and suppresses anxiety, which leads to great concentration. The ability to gather the mind and direct it continuously towards one object--in this instance, the project, the art, the work you're creating. Finally, there is equanimity. "It is a mind without clinging or aversion, so it is not inclined towards any extreme" (132). I don't believe wild flights of emotion, extreme reactions, or disrupted mind states lead to great art. The best writers I have ever met are, without exception centered, focused people. They are not emotional automatons or enlightened beings above petty human concerns, but they have disciplined minds, patience with themselves, and focus.

Friday, March 4, 2011

Friday Reads: The Ode Less Traveled: Unlocking the Poet Within by Stephen Fry


Note: Friday Reads posts aren't formal reviews, but rather recommendations, responses, or just an update on what we're reading in our personal time. We welcome suggestions! We're always looking for good books, so please feel free to use the comment section to recommend your own Friday Reads or even your own books!
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I love Stephen Fry. Witty, hilarious, brutally honest, kind to all but himself, charming, intelligent, open-minded, curious, and clever. It's hard to believe that one man could be so many things. I'm sorry to admit that I only recent discovered his true brilliance. Jasie has been a fan of Mr. Fry's for years, but I never really paid attention. I didn't see why I should. If only I hadn't been such a blind, stupid fool for so long! I missed out on years and years of comedy, movies, books, documentaries, and facts. Is there anything more delightful than Blackadder? Yes. Two things, in fact, and Stephen Fry was instrumental in both! A Bit of Fry and Laurie and Jeeves and Wooster. Anyway, this isn't a Stephen Fry fansite, so I'll move on with it, but do let me add that if you aren't familiar with the shows mentioned above, do yourself a favor and check them out. Blackadder and A Bit of Fry and Laurie are both available on Netflix Instant, and Jeeves and Wooster isn't difficult to find.

When I learned of The Ode Less Traveled: Unlocking the Poet Within I knew it needed to be mine. When I found out it was also an audio book, I nearly fainted with happiness! How positively marvelous! Now, it's not that I'm a great poet or that I particularly enjoy writing poetry. I'm not and I don't.



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But poetry is an important part of who I am and what I studied, and I'm a little ashamed to admit it, but I never really felt comfortable with it. I have a difficult time with meter, and so scanning poetry for classes (or my MA exam) was always a tedious nightmare. I'm much, much more comfortable with free verse and beat poetry. Perhaps it's not surprising that my favorite poets are Walt Whitman, William Carlos Williams, and Allen Ginsberg.

What thoughts I have of you tonight, Walt Whitman, for
I walked down the sidestreets under the trees with a headache self-conscious looking at the full moon.
In my hungry fatigue, and shopping for images, I went
into the neon fruit supermarket, dreaming of your enumerations!

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Stephen Fry is a fan of free verse, too, but that's not what The Ode Less Traveled is about. In fact, the book is about the very elements of poetry I find so frightening. He covers meter extensively, and not just iambic pentameter. He covered some metrical feet I've never even heard of, and each chapter ended with exercises to help the reader grow comfortable writing her own poetry. He also covers rhyme--which I find almost as daunting as regular meter when it comes to writing--and poetic form and structure. He takes the time in his patient, all-knowing, and wise way to explain each element of posey, why it matters, and how we can use it to express our thoughts and feelings that normally cannot be expressed at all. He even spent a great deal of time on the subject of Gerard Manly Hopkins, who invented "sprung rhythm" and who was the bane of my life for four months as I prepared for my MA exam. Fry put my mind to rest by quoting Hopkins, who said "Only three people understand sprung rhythm and one of them is dead. The other is mad."

You might be thinking "That's all well and good but I have no interest in meter, rhyme, form, or any of that other stuff." But that's exactly what Fry is counting on. This is not a book of poetry for other poets. As he explains in the beginning, poetry can be a wonderful hobby and form of expression just like any other form of writing, or painting, or music. You can't sit down at a piano and play Mozart on the first day, and nobody expects you to. You practice and practice and study and practice some more. In his book, Fry provides the necessary tools to learn how to be a poet. And in the process, he provides a good foundation for learning how to read poetry.

I think this book should be taught at every university and in every introduction to poetry course. I think it should be the English major's best friend. Clear writing, clear thinking, wit, and gentle British encouragement makes the book a singularly lovely experience. Fry was a teacher once, and while I'm glad he moved on to bigger and better things, I think a part of him will always belong in the classroom. He's a natural teacher.

And now just to prove how effective his methods are, I offer my own humble poem. It's not that great, but nobody said it had to be. It's an accomplishment for me, all the same.



Making News
We gather every day, on time
At special times. In times of sorrow.
Each morning, in mourning, at night
Before we sleep and when we eat.

Watch the headlines, believe the lies
The talking heads must have a point.
If they are lying confused cheats
then why are they the new clergy?

Accountability? What's that?
There exists only one
Word for the newly ordained priests.
Customer. The word is good.

Times are good! We crave a steady
fix of lectures despair
doom and thrilling prophesies to
sate the need for villains.

"You're a commie" "You're a terrorist"
Accusations flung blind
Preaching a new covenant
Hate speech isn't a crime.


It's rubbish, I know. But it's my rubbish and I'm glad I wrote it. Don't hold it against the book.

If you're at all interested in poetry as a writer or a student, or Stephen Fry because you love him, then read this book. It's time well spent. Also, how wonderful is the cover of this book with the D.I.Y on the ink pot?

There's also a lovely, more detailed review at Shelf Love.